Your needle or mine?

Here's the first iteration of the revised teaser poster for Detox featuring a syringe shot by Francis George. Comments are greatly appreciated (good and bad). This is to promote the script - not the film - hence the lack of real credits (like "directed by" or "produced by"). The credit block at the bottom reads "Rubbersquare in association with Abe Froman Productions presents "Detox" a feature-length screenplay from the creators of the acclaimed film "The Bet" Michael Dunn & Chris Smith" and then "detox.rubbersquare.com"

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